





Treatment/Pitch Bible Coverage
From my experience working in Commissioning, your Treatment/Pitch Bible is what will get your idea through the door before your script does.
As they are more compact, your bible will usually be used to determine whether your project is interesting enough for Commissioners (or investors) to sit down and actually read your script.
Do not underestimate the impact of your Bible.
Using my extensive experience working within big media companies such as UKTV, BBC and MPC Film, I will analyse your project, diving deep into the foundations of your story, to ensure you leave TOP MSFIT with confidence that will push your project from good to GREAT!
About the Service
Step 1:
Following your purchase, you’ll receive instructions to send in your material to be reviewed (15 Pages Maximum)
Step 2:
We’ll review your project, analysing each component of your story and tailoring an in-depth report; highlighting what’s working, any areas of concern, and valuable solutions to help make your story more digestible.
Response Time Est. 1 Week Maximum.
Step 3:
You will receive your coverage report and a discount code for your next service with us.
You’ll be given 24/7 access to my WhatsApp chat for any follow-up questions or points of discussion.
You’ll be added to the ‘Storytellers Galore’ group chat, where you can meet other Writers in the industry.
With your permission, we’ll also recommend your work to Production Companies if you match what they’re looking for.
We will work together to make your story stand out from the crowd and position you for success.
From my experience working in Commissioning, your Treatment/Pitch Bible is what will get your idea through the door before your script does.
As they are more compact, your bible will usually be used to determine whether your project is interesting enough for Commissioners (or investors) to sit down and actually read your script.
Do not underestimate the impact of your Bible.
Using my extensive experience working within big media companies such as UKTV, BBC and MPC Film, I will analyse your project, diving deep into the foundations of your story, to ensure you leave TOP MSFIT with confidence that will push your project from good to GREAT!
About the Service
Step 1:
Following your purchase, you’ll receive instructions to send in your material to be reviewed (15 Pages Maximum)
Step 2:
We’ll review your project, analysing each component of your story and tailoring an in-depth report; highlighting what’s working, any areas of concern, and valuable solutions to help make your story more digestible.
Response Time Est. 1 Week Maximum.
Step 3:
You will receive your coverage report and a discount code for your next service with us.
You’ll be given 24/7 access to my WhatsApp chat for any follow-up questions or points of discussion.
You’ll be added to the ‘Storytellers Galore’ group chat, where you can meet other Writers in the industry.
With your permission, we’ll also recommend your work to Production Companies if you match what they’re looking for.
We will work together to make your story stand out from the crowd and position you for success.
✓ 15 mins Intro Call (Optional)
✓ Feedback & Coverage Report
✓ Tailored Response
✓ Split Payment Option