Top Msfits

TV & FILM STORY CONSULTANCY 

TURN A GOOD STORY INTO A GREAT STORY

WHAT DO WE PROVIDE ?

We provide professional, BBC-standard feedback that ensures your project is prepared for submission.

We provide the same professional coverage used at the BBC to identify concept-level concerns that usually lead to a rejection. The aim is for you to leave our services with valuable intel that will put your project ahead of the game and set you up for success.

We do not settle for mediocre storytelling; we are passionate and dedicated to pushing your project to the best version of itself.

  • Using my extensive experience working within big media companies such as UKTV, BBC and MPC Film. I will analyse your project, diving deep into the foundations of your story, to ensure you leave TOP MSFIT with the confidence that will push your project from good to GREAT!

    About the Service

    Step 1:

    • Following your purchase, you’ll receive instructions to send in your material to be reviewed (15 Pages Maximum)

    Step 2:

    • We’ll review your project, analysing each competent of your story and tailoring an in-depth report; highlighting what’s working, any areas of concern, and valuable solutions to help make your story more digestible.

    • Response Time Est. 1 Week Maximum.

    Step 3:

    • You will receive your coverage report, and a discount code for your next service with us.

    • You’ll be given 24/7 access to my WhatsApp chat for any follow up questions or points of discussion.

    • You’ll be added to the ‘Storytellers Galore’ group chat, where you can meet other Writers in the industry.

    • With your permission, we’ll also recommend your work to Production Companies if you match what they’re looking for.

    We will work together to make your story stand out from the crowd and position you for success.

Join our Weekly Trivia Competitions

For the chance to win CASH PRIZES and Exclusive Discounts on our professional BBC standard coverage reports.

HOW DOES IT WORK ?

WHAT IS MOVIE OLYMPIA ?

Movie Olympia is the ultimate weekly Movie Trivia Competition, specifically designed to aid Writers and those working within TV & Film .

We host weekly games with Cash prizes and discounted professional services for emerging talent within the media industry.

Top Msfit aims to supports as many Creatives as possible; cash prizes are encouraged to be used on cost of living or equipment to advance careers within TV and Film.

We also invite our players into the Top Msfit family, providing discounted services, project development support and pitch prepation that can be used to increase the quality of their projects and preparation for Writers who are keen to get their work on the screen, we use our BBC intel to improve the quality of projects and prepare them for submission.

Still got questions ?

Join our Movie Olympia group chat to connect with other players, ask questions and be the first to know about exclusive games with GREAT prizes.

WHY DO YOU NEED US ?

  • cash prizes

    Providing Professional BBC Insider Notes

    Commissioners and development execs often reject projects for issues that could have been addressed early — tone clashes, underdeveloped arcs, or unclear formats. A story consultant provides the same level of internal “coverage” that commissioning teams use, giving producers a realistic view of how their project might be received before it’s submitted.

  • Movie Olympia

    Get External feedback without the emotion

    Sometimes the feedback from friends or an internal team is unreliable, as they’re too close to the writer they can overlook blind spots and be too focused on trying not to insult the work.

    We provide productive, honest feedback, and encourage you to explore bold changes that will take your project to the next level.

  • Movie Trivia

    Strengthens Pitches for Broadcasters and Investors

    Polished treatments and Bibles help producers stand out. With tailored feedback and actionable suggestions, we help you shape your project in a way that is clearer, sharper, and more marketable, giving the decision-makers the confidence to say YES from page one.

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    Saves Time and Resources in Development✅

    Getting stuck in development loops or chasing unclear notes can cost time and money. We get straight to the point and help identify structural issues early, speeding up the refinement process so you can focus on getting ahead of the game.

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    Futureproof Projects

    Commissioning trends shift fast. We will provide you with professional intel to keep you informed across industry expectations, audience trends, and platform differences — helping you develop material that’s better positioned for today’s market, whether that's for BBC, Netflix, Channel 4, or beyond.

Join the Stoytellers Galore WhatsApp Community

If you’re a passionate storyteller, join our supportive WhatsApp Community to connect with other creatives; ask questions, share advice and create lasting networks.

Storytellers Galore